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I go when I'm lonely
I go when I'm sad
I go when I'm empty
Depressed or mad
My friends are all there
They know me so well
I'm upset when I see them
I know they can tell
Quiet and calm
Soft winds do blow
All of my friends
Down six feet below
They listen to me
No judgment is made
I talk and I rant
My manic tirade
Cold stones and grass
Tall ancient pine trees
The smell of fresh lawn
Cool autumn breeze
So many times
Have I been here before
I know they all hear me
They help me restore
Soon I will join them
Soon I must go
And be with my friends
Down six feet below
Tell me what you think.



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that was an awesome pome shame you are banned
Last edited by joe TS18 (Nov 01, 2009 (9:04 pm))
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i liked that,but like joe said,it's a shame youre banned ![]()

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Wow. Kinda emo in a way. But it was very good.
I might try and write a story myself.
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